Write them an Letter about the problem.
· Explain why deadlines are important
· Describe the effect on other staff of not meeting deadlines
· Suggest what they should do about the situation
Dear Sai,
I would like to inform you that 'Santoor' advertisement shoot is not yet completed which is a high priority task as we discussed on last week.
As you knew that our agency is a one of the promisable agency in the city. We usually do deliverables on time which is a major factor for customer had a positive feedback on us. On last month, I assigned you a "Santoor" promotion which I was expected to complete by this week. But, I heard that it is partially done. I am really disappointed about you work. This is not a first time about you performance.
Customer is expecting to finish complete shooting as soon as possible. We already delayed for a week. I got a lot of escalation emails from high authority team as well. So, I am expecting you to finish the task by end of this week or else we have to give a proper explanation to them which is really bad impression to our team.
Please feel free to contact me if you are facing any issue. Thank you.
Yours sincerely,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... task as we discussed on last week. As you knew that our agency is a one of th...
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Line 5, column 209, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ck on us. On last month, I assigned you a 'Santoor' promotion which I w...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 821.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46195652174 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84703253962 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603260869565 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.525617483 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.4166666667 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0379835360334 0.216113520407 18% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0157475405188 0.0766984524023 21% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0299677193877 0.0603063233224 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0182920969251 0.12726935374 14% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244831993389 0.0580467560999 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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