The diagrams below show the design for a wind turbine and its location.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

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The diagrams below show the design for a wind turbine and its location.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

Submitted by nasrink on Tue, 07/30/2019 - 07:21

The diagram shows different parts of a wind turbine and possible locations that it can be installed.
The wind turbine is one of the important renewable energy devices which can convert wind energy to electricity. A wind turbine has different parts. it is composed of three blades that the material of blades can be fiberglass or wood, wind sensor, generator and a steel tower that all other parts are installed top of it. there is also a computer that receives information from the sensor then can adjust the direction and angle of blades.
The wind turbine can be located in various places. there are off-shore, on-shore and domestic wind turbines. All several kinds have their own cons and pros. For instance, in off-shore type that is located in the sea, the landscape is not ruined however, expenses for installation is too much. domestic turbines produce electricity locally. In this case, the output power is about 100 kilowatts. On-shore wind turbines are usually installed top of the hill where the wind is strongest,
generally, all types of wind turbines have the same parts although, the location of installation can be different.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, then, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 960.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05263157895 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66951602158 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563157894737 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.27731433 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8333333333 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182040309318 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731047044255 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513852739944 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12164441693 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353146758042 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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