The chart below shows information about the problems people have when they go to live in other countries.

Essay topics:

The chart below shows information about the problems people have when they go to live in other countries.

The chart shows different difficulties that people have who move to another country to live there, and also it compares these difficulties between different ages.
The biggest problem for middle age group is healthcare. it is about 37 percent and is higher than people aged 18-34 (33 percent) and also higher than people over 55 years old (about 36 percent).
The second biggest problem is organising finances. In middle aged people, it is 35 percent that is the highest percentage among all people. it is about 34 percent for people aged 18-34 and about 29 percent for people over 55.
In contrast, all people in different ages have less problem regarding education. As it is obvious from the chart, only 6 percent of 18-34 age group group " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">have problem in finding suitable schools for their children. it is about 19 percent for 35-54 age group that is the highest percentage compare with other groups and only 2 percent of people over 55 years old face with this difficulty.
Generally, all people in different ages face with different problems. However, people aged 35-54 have more problems compare with the other age groups.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...lems compare with the other age groups.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, regarding, second, so, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1053.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18719211823 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84244563663 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512315270936 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.7589737616 43.030603864 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7272727273 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.13902439024 702% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197740375536 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904625726943 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508181386298 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128865452854 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198805592212 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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