you have recently started a work in a new company.
Write a letter to a friend.
Dear Raymund,
It’s for a long time I haven’t written to you. Hope everything is good for you!
I’ve changed my job. It was not because of any special reasons, just I want to be challenged in a new environment. You know, as I told you in the last letter, I had finished my project in Ho Chi Minh city, as the result, there were not a lot of thing to do in my old company so I feel so boring. I decided to seek for a new job and I got it. My current company is suitable for me since it locates in the center commercial and easy to access. Moreover, my new boss is enthusiastic, he is also extremely helpful and friendly.
But there are one thing that I need your advice: although my salary here is acceptable, the company do not provide me any social insurance. I wonder if this could lead to any effect in the future.
I’m looking forward to your response.
Lots of love.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 241, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of things'.
Suggestion: a lot of things
...inh city, as the result, there were not a lot of thing to do in my old company so I feel so bo...
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Line 5, column 19, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'things'?
Suggestion: things
...elpful and friendly. But there are one thing that I need your advice: although my sa...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, thus, i feel, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 731.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62672582911 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652941176471 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9605888024 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.4545454545 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4545454545 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0978338246629 0.216113520407 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0332796472624 0.0766984524023 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323917723355 0.0603063233224 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0460336689828 0.12726935374 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468719330923 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.36 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.