Write about the following topic:
Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.
Why do you think this is happening?
What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Although every day in our life we hear about the different problems arising due to the high volume of rubbish produced these days, hence there is a growing tendency to combat it with a best solution. I am of the opinion that with the proper effective measures, this situation will improve if government takes necessary steps towards it.
There are a number of causative factors for the rise of different types of waste products. One of the biggest reason is the growth of industrialization in the recent years. It is because increasing number of industries produces a large amount of wastes. When garbage is disposed directly to the seawater or dumped under the ground, it creates air and water and land pollution. For example, the city of Surat in India is profoundly famous for textile industries, and the factories produce huge amount of waste every week that is disposed directly in the sea nearby. This causes hazardous effects to the life of local people and to the species surviving in the seawater.
There are many steps with which the authorities can deal with this problem effectively. Firstly, they can pass strict regulatory rules to promote recycled products. They can propel people to buy recycled products and at the same time enforce industries to use recyclable materials for manufacturing. For instance, Indian government had banned Polythene bags last year, which had reduced the overall production of plastic bags and their consumption in that year. Therefore, reducing generation of plastics wastes.
From the above discussion, I see a great improvement in such a situation on the reduction of production of rubbish provided the aforementioned measures are taken.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 120, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'these days'?
Suggestion: this day; these days
... to the high volume of rubbish produced these day, hence there is a growing tendency to c...
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Line 1, column 183, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...is a growing tendency to combat it with a best solution. I am of the opinion that...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14179104478 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85565530286 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611940298507 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0428826282 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4285714286 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158667585157 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045183314389 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0277947202913 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0832527102655 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0144816986568 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.