A friend is expecting you to stay with him in two weeks time, but unfortunately you forgot that you have a business trip at the same time.
Write letter to friend
-apologise and say that you cannot come to visit
-explain why you will not able to visit
-suggest another time that you could visit
Dear John,
hope you find this letter in the pink of your health.I am writing this to convey my sincere apologies as I would not be able to see you as discussed and decide because of some unforeseen reasons.
I know you were very excited on consolidation of this long-awaited get together plan and so was I.But,I take the owns of this cancellation as I did not realise the pre-planned business tour in the same week and I ask your pardon for spoiling entire plan.
As your aware , I am one of the prime candidate for promotion this year, I can not deny the trip as it can jeopardize my career.Moreovers,it is an imperative meeting from company's point of view and I have been assigned the in-charge of this entire formal talk with our prominent customer in Australia.
The tour is of two weeks and I will he definitely back in the tour before onset of festival of lights 'Diwali' .How about speeding entire festival together ! I would be with your then for sure.I hope you dont have any other place.
Write to me if you agree on the alternate plan.Sorry again and hope to see you soon.
Best Regards,
john
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... this letter in the pink of your health.I am writing this to convey my sincere ap...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...-awaited get together plan and so was I.But,I take the owns of this cancellation as...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...aited get together plan and so was I.But,I take the owns of this cancellation as I...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... spoiling entire plan. As your aware , I am one of the prime candidate for pro...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreovers
...the trip as it can jeopardize my career.Moreovers,it is an imperative meeting from compan...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...as it can jeopardize my career.Moreovers,it is an imperative meeting from companys ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...our prominent customer in Australia. The tour is of two weeks and I will he d...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...efore onset of festival of lights Diwali .How about speeding entire festival toget...
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Suggestion: How
...ore onset of festival of lights Diwali .How about speeding entire festival together...
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Suggestion: I
...er ! I would be with your then for sure.I hope you dont have any other place. ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...d be with your then for sure.I hope you dont have any other place. Write to me if...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Sorry
...o me if you agree on the alternate plan.Sorry again and hope to see you soon. Best...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o see you soon. Best Regards, john
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58706467662 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69544118627 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63184079602 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 16.3608247423 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.53834561 44.8134815571 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 153.666666667 76.5299724578 201% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 33.5 16.8248392259 199% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205829858043 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104001415954 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072443880461 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125987993262 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616340969395 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 8.37731958763 202% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 70.7449484536 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 7.45979381443 201% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 8.62886597938 214% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 8.54432989691 178% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.