Not so many people use a bicycle although it has many benefits. Why? How to encourage people to use bicycles as a main transport?
In the contemporary era, most of people in the world gravitate to leave the bicycle as the main transportation’s vehicle. One important aspect of this reality is most of people have been changing their transportation mode from manual mode such as bicycle to auto mobile system which it refers to car, bus as well as motorcycle. In my view, there are three factors which are set out below.
First, I would like to argue that even though utilizing green transportation such as bicycle, scooter, and skate board are cheapest and might made people healthier than motor transportation, albeit green transportation tend to ineffective due to take more time. due to these conditions, most of people believe that riding by auto mobile are more effective than green transportation.
On the other hand, referring the data from research Centre for sustainable City Studies at International Institute of Sciences the Netherlands stated that there are the perception in rural and urban society that the people who have car and motor cycle are the rich man, and they could gain the social prestige from the others.
However, even though there are many research from naturalist scholars who showed that there are many positive impact which made by green transportation to strengthening sustainable environment and reducing the number of disease in the society, albeit they do not publish and socializing their research results massively.
taking everything into consideration, I believe that all of countries in the world should campaign riding by bicycle and various green transportation as the alternative vehicles which it could reduce the environmental damage as the effect of auto mobile pollution and it could reconstruct the people for staying in healthy lifestyle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
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Suggestion: most of the people; most people
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, then, well, such as, as well as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33928571429 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09649036023 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560714285714 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.012499219 49.4020404114 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 186.875 106.682146367 175% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.0 20.7667163134 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191061156729 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863721491685 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606595674038 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976003112752 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451632109345 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.2 13.0946893788 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.49 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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