Some people like to buy and eat their meals at restaurants frequently, while others like to do this at home. Which do you prefer? Why?
Today there is no shortage of debate that restaurants are the best places to have a lunch or have a cup of coffee with friends or co-workers. moreover, a lot of people support this because they suggest that if person buy his meal in a restaurant, he will safe a lot of time. From my pion of view, it will be more beneficial for people to prepare food for themselves and I fill this way for some reasons.
First of all, it will be less costly to cook rather than eat in the restaurant. it is common knowledge that meal in the restaurant is usually quite expensive. Furthermore, a large number of people can not afford it. In addition, all restaurants want to make profit from consumers, so they always install high prices on their service. I think that it is quite money consuming to buy every meal in cafe.
Secondly, it is a vital skill for every one to have an ability to cook. it goes without saying that people can not live without food, so if person acquire this skill, he will be able to sustain his life. For example, I have a friend who does not know how to cook. After school she had to moved to the another city for entering university. Unfortunately, she was in a tight budget, so she could not afford to buy meals in the restaurant. so, she has experienced anxious, but luckily she has some friends who have tought her how to cook.
Finally, food in the cafe not always is better than home-made food. it is definitely true that cooks in the restaurants should prepare food for a large quantity of people. For this reason, the quality of food can dramatically declines. moreover, you can not know exactly what quality of products they used. As for me, I prefer to eat at home because I will be sure that my products have only a high quality.
By the way of conclusion, based on arguments explored above, I would like to say that everyone should choose what will be appropriate for them, but I am really keen on home-made meals because it is much tasty than food in the cafe.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 78, Rule ID: HAVE_A_BREAKFAST[1]
Message: When we speak of types of meals, the article is not required: 'have lunch'.
Suggestion: have lunch
...that restaurants are the best places to have a lunch or have a cup of coffee with friends or...
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Line 1, column 143, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...p of coffee with friends or co-workers. moreover, a lot of people support this because t...
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Line 2, column 80, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...cook rather than eat in the restaurant. it is common knowledge that meal in the re...
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Line 2, column 172, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...s usually quite expensive. Furthermore, a large number of people can not afford it. In addition, ...
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Line 4, column 73, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...r every one to have an ability to cook. it goes without saying that people can not...
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Line 4, column 438, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
... afford to buy meals in the restaurant. so, she has experienced anxious, but lucki...
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Line 6, column 31, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: is always
... cook. Finally, food in the cafe not always is better than home-made food. it is defin...
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Line 6, column 69, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...t always is better than home-made food. it is definitely true that cooks in the re...
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Line 6, column 227, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'decline'
Suggestion: decline
...n, the quality of food can dramatically declines. moreover, you can not know exactly wha...
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Line 6, column 237, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...lity of food can dramatically declines. moreover, you can not know exactly what quality ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, as for, for example, i think, in addition, by the way, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40921409214 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49885366746 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523035230352 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2217602797 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.35 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.45 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 5.45110844103 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156624556773 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453180688084 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331595600814 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888376967838 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257187666576 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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