Do you think that physical activities should be introduced to schoolchildren on a regular basis? Explain .what kind of sports are the most useful?
it is very important for whole developement of children to do regular physical activity,also it become a regular routine of the child.The best time to do that for children is in the morning time ,so this activity must include in school time .then all children do it compulsory on regular basis for fixed time period.The plethora of benefits of physical activities for children discussed in the upcoming essay.
regular physical exercise is require for healthy mind and healthy body.it helps lot to the development of children to grow up properly and having strong bones.The researchers proved that the children who does exercise regularly since their childhood years that helps to prevent many disease later in their life-like obesity,diabetes, and so on.
sports and any other form of physical activities helps number of way to reduce stress.physical activity also helps to children to do well in academically,as they are able to concentrate better on their study.evenmore they do their task on time and meet their desire grades.This is the reason now days most of the school have physical education as a part of their curiculum.it is as important as other subject of academic taught at schools.
The another crucial benefits of sport activities are children develope another life essential things such as self-development,team-work and other skills like co-operation ,sportsmanship spirit and so on.there are many sports that can be easily incorporated by schools,If there is enough open space available at school.sports like basketball,handball,cricket,football etc.If some school does not have open area ,then many Indore games taught to the student like table tennis,badminton and many more.many other Indore game can be included like chess , which can help student develope strategy-related skills.
To sum up this,I would conclude that it is very essential that physical activity be a part of every childs daily routine .it can have a profound effect on both the mental and physical health of children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, well, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46984126984 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.73825538946 2.80592935109 133% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546031746032 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 63.0 20.2975951904 310% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 133.22552308 49.4020404114 270% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 344.6 106.682146367 323% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 63.0 20.7667163134 303% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175756360417 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0996083102328 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360723992521 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0996083102328 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360723992521 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.8 13.0946893788 273% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -0.93 50.2224549098 -2% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.0 11.3001002004 257% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.33 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.27 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.2 10.1190380762 269% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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