In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
It is believed that there are a number of people who weight above the average in some countries and due to this fact health and fitness levels of them are deteriorating. Some of the reasons of this argument and possible solutions are going to be analyzed in the following essay.
There are particular factors which contribute to gaining weight. Firstly, unhealthy diet is one of them. For example, rather than cooking at home people order pizza or other types of unhealthy food which are far from the routine of healthy diet and indeed leads to obesity. In addition, in current days innovative electronic devices alleviate people`s life but they also have some negative sides. For example, people spend most of their time sitting and staring at their phones. Because of people`s addiction to their gadgets reluctance to do some physical activities and sedentary lifestyle commonly occur which in turn discourage staying in shape.
However, there are still some possible solutions to tackle with this problem. One solution would be to maintain a healthy diet which means that people whose weight is above the average should limit themselves in junk food. Instead of it, eating vegetables and fruits may be a better option. Another solution is providing these people with sport facilities by building sport centres nearby and also increasing the number of restaurants and cafes where proper dietary food is served. If people do some regular exercises and keep a healthy diet, they will probably not have any problems related to gaining weight.
In conclusion, even though we have lots of opportunities which eases our life, we should be able to use them appropriately by not harming ourselves.
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- In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them? 78
- We can not help everyone in the world that needs help so we should only be concerned with our own community and country to what extent do you agree or disagree with this point? 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, still, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14028776978 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64680013505 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607913669065 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4815631653 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.071428571 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243469515188 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799551602135 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603630546013 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141520342319 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695110887392 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.