TPO 4 _ Independent Task
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than today.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The issue of whether there will be the fewer car in twenty years compare with today aroused much controversy among people of different ages and different perspectives. Definitely, some people if were asked would agree with the statement that the number of cars declines in the future in comparison to today, while others have a negative attitude toward this point of view. As far as I am concerned, I postulate a number of cars enhance significantly in the future. In the following paragraph, I will shed light on the arguments to support my view.
The first vital point to be mentioned is that the earth population has exceedingly escalated in recent centuries and researchers predicted this increasing trend will continue in the future decades. Therefore, this population needs a huge means of transportation for commuting. Since public transportation could not meet these increasing demands because of lack of infrastructure, therefore, the private cars would be prominent of means of transportation in use. If we analyze the number of cars that used in two recent decades, we see, even though other kinds of transportations like subway, public bus, and airplane develop in each country, most of the people still prefer their own vehicle. As a result, we could not expect this trend to reduce in the near future.
In approaching this issue, apart from the reason given above, another reason that deserves some words is that people consider the private car as a luxurious possession. Hence, they would want to obtain even more cars to show others their wealth. For instance, in my country, family compete with each other to have a new model car. They work up to 8 hours each day to earn more money and win this rivalry. In addition, I surmise, not only the number of car decrease but also some odd and peculiar cars like flying care would come to the market. As a result, this tendency would assist to boost the use of cars.
On the other hand, some people claim due to the many serious problems like air pollution and lack of parking space people would not have the tendency to buy a car. In contrast, I assume these difficulties exist today but how care about this issue. This escalating trend has been never stopped soon.
By the way of conclusion, based on the arguments explored above, I am of the opinion there will be more car in use in the future because the increasing demand for more care is the inevitable consequence of the growth of population. Moreover, private car considers a splendid property and people would want a new kind of car.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 270, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[8]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put between 'has' and 'been'.
Suggestion: has never been
...about this issue. This escalating trend has been never stopped soon. By the way of conclusion...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, apart from, for instance, in addition, in contrast, kind of, as a result, by the way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2119.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 440.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81590909091 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70276775036 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506818181818 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 672.3 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7932606682 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.95 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.55 5.45110844103 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178301600979 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536213784427 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486796118163 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10590421617 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710776015128 0.0645574589148 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.