Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter
suggest someone you think should receive the award
describe what the person does to help the community
suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in regards to the offer of an award for people who have been involved in helping needy and poor individuals. The program will be conducted by volunteers next week followed by some announcements about the next program. I would like to recommend and nominate a social worker, Sushil Kumar, who has been helping people for quite a long time. I believe that he should be presented with a reward for his hard work and good deeds.
Being a kind and responsible person towards society, Sushil has helped many poor people by providing them better job opportunities. Apart from this, he voluteerly educates poor children on weekends, so that they can get a better lifestyle in the future. He is a great public speaker who has been fighting for gender equality for a while. Moreover, he is always supported by the public all over the country for his tremendous work which he had done for the community.
I would like to suggest you consider his name for the award distribution program on behalf of me and my society members. This would motivate him for doing this amazing social work. I believe the award of 'responsible man of the community' would be perfect for him. Moreover, it would be great if you can publish an article about his achievements in the area of improving poverty
I am eagerly waiting for your response.
Yours sincerely,
John Carberry
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter in regards to the offer of an award for people who ha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1156.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79668049793 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62771928905 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601659751037 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2533201431 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9230769231 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5384615385 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07692307692 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228892185032 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817611860563 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072997420029 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133562178032 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521323821213 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.