Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In recent decades, A significant group of people prefers to live in a foreign country that has a high-level economy and more security. These immigrated population usually are faced with a lot of social and practical problems. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss that social problems are more than practical issuies and give some relevant examples.
At the first, find a relevant and acceptable job is the most important problem that immigrated people has. it is a good evidence that human resource manages in all the organizations effair to employ from local people with the local language. For example, a foreign engineer must learn the organization rules and it needs to spend a lot of times. By and large, providing the necessary and primary needs is the second problem for strangers.
it is clear that, all shopping malls and local businesses speak in national language. Meanwhile, a foreign man can not make a complete relationship by them and make a mess in the society.
On the other hand, practical problems is less than social problems and usually has ordinary solutions. For instance, doing sport can be done in the personal accomodations and no need to speak with foreign language people.
To put in a nutshell, I pen down saying that, living people in their home country is easier than living in a foreign country. Whereas a lot of people choose an other country to state because of economy and social levels. The mentioned people will be faced with so many social problems on contrast by practical problems.
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...country. Whereas a lot of people choose an other country to state because of economy and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, whereas, while, for example, for instance, by and large, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94186046512 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72723104913 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53488372093 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 16.2589065074 49.4020404114 33% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.0714285714 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205147981841 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697834299864 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561337844721 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11727540582 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613226112912 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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