Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centers. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Most of the main cities in different nations have become overloaded by a plethora of factories and big companies. This indeed makes huge difficulties for local people. As it leads for too much traffic congestions and pollution. Therefore, many individuals argue that the best way to minimize such issue and keep the environment free of awful effects is by relocating those industries and firms outside the downtown in some allocated areas. This essay aims to explore the benefits and drawbacks of such an action in further detail before coming to a conclusion.
To begin with, there is no doubt that most of the people believe that working and live outside their city centers is extremely disadvantages due to many factors. First of all, they will not be surrounded by various significant facilities such as hospitals, shopping malls, schools and more in rural area. Second of all, they will spend a lot of times, money and effort if they work and dwell in the far places. As, the minimum distance t during their day will very longer than if their work and live oinside the main town.
In contrast, it’s irrefutable that the main advantages of relocating factories and companies out of the main cities are firstly, get the rid of traffic congestion in several due to high overpopulation in it. Cairo for example is the capital city of Egypt, most of the factories and companies were opening in the city center and causing massive traffic problems and over pressure on the public transport. Furthermore, the cost of houses and flats were very high due to the increasing of population demand there. The Egyptian government alternatively, established another city called New Egypt which is far from the downtown almost 45 Km where most the of governmental offices, private companies, and factories are found. In a result, the cost of living there has alleviated conspicuously which made the life more affordable for most of their citizens. In addition, relocating factories and companies will play an instrumental role in decreasing the pollution in the city. Syria as an example is considered as a very bad nation to live due to unclear environment. Since it’s over occupied by plenty of industries that have a dangerous emission which affect people life. Lots of global reports in fact, have shown the increase of cancer disease among Syrian people due to unpleasant environment. That applied a very high pressure on the local authorities to speacialized an area that called The Industrial Zone which's away from people living areas in terms of enhancing the local environment.
To sum up, I believe that the advantages of switching factories and companies into another well prepared area outweigh the disadvantages.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in contrast, in fact, no doubt, such as, first of all, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 41.998997996 164% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2289.0 1615.20841683 142% => OK
No of words: 449.0 315.596192385 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09799554566 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84814396546 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543429844098 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 719.1 506.74238477 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7235486666 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.45 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.45 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118387750735 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0343271310476 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324236572295 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0780420136778 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242283989443 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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