The following is a letter to the head of the tourism bureau on the island of Tria.
"Erosion of beach sand along the shores of Tria Island is a serious threat to our island and our tourist industry. In order to stop the erosion, we should charge people for using the beaches. Although this solution may annoy a few tourists in the short term, it will reduce the number of people using the beaches and will raise money for replenishing the sand. Replenishing the sand, as was done to protect buildings on the nearby island of Batia, will help protect buildings along our shores, thereby reducing these buildings' risk of additional damage from severe storms. And since the areas along the shore will be more attractive as a result, the beaches will be preserved and the area's tourist industry will improve over the long term."
The letter states that charging people for using beach on the island of Tria will replenish the sand as well as protecting buildings and improve area's tourist industry over the long term. Though this statement might be true since erosion of beach sand could be a serious threat to the island and tourist industry, many other pieces of evidences are required to substantiate the feasibility and consequence of such recommendation.
To begin with, the author fails to provide the information indicating whether the government is able to raise money for replenish the sand. If people are charge...
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
argument 1 -- OK
argument 2 -- OK
argument 3 -- OK
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 5.0 out of 6
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 26 15
No. of Words: 620 350
No. of Characters: 3141 1500
No. of Different Words: 268 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.99 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.066 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.741 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 233 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 174 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 119 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 78 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.846 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.507 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.692 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.28 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.473 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.081 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1022, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...vernment subsidy and so on. Moreover, another piece of information w...
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Line 5, column 260, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'amounts'?
Suggestion: amounts
...earby island of Batia, there are a mass amount of different characteristics between Tr...
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Line 7, column 802, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ired to conclude tourist industry. To sum up, as it stands, the letter to t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, well, as to, for example, in addition, such as, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 38.0 19.6327345309 194% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 12.9520958084 185% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 11.1786427146 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 28.8173652695 76% => OK
Preposition: 77.0 55.5748502994 139% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 16.3942115768 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3253.0 2260.96107784 144% => OK
No of words: 615.0 441.139720559 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28943089431 5.12650576532 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.97987886753 4.56307096286 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00011060232 2.78398813304 108% => OK
Unique words: 290.0 204.123752495 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471544715447 0.468620217663 101% => OK
syllable_count: 983.7 705.55239521 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.96107784431 181% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 2.70958083832 369% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.22255489022 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 19.7664670659 116% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.8473053892 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.961193014 57.8364921388 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.434782609 119.503703932 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7391304348 23.324526521 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.04347826087 5.70786347227 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.20758483034 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240922638241 0.218282227539 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075144639945 0.0743258471296 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574312894854 0.0701772020484 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158327133798 0.128457276422 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671038729076 0.0628817314937 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 14.3799401198 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.3550499002 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.197005988 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.5979740519 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.32208582834 105% => OK
difficult_words: 147.0 98.500998004 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 12.3882235529 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.1389221557 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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