With an increase in the number of privately owned vehicles, roads are becoming more congested. What measures could both government and individuals take to deal with this situation?
Burgeoning traffic jams are a major problem in large cities around the world. Experiencing difficulties, many individuals prefer using their own vehicles instead of public transportation. Such a devastating issue could be solved with the help of both governments and individuals as it will be discussed in this essay.
Governments have the responsibility to address the problems related to the population within their jurisdiction. Despite having financial difficulties, they should dedicate a huge proportion of their annual budget for the development of the existing infrastructure. Constructing new train and bus stations would not only reduces the traffic issues by attracting more customers, but also lowers the travel times which could be a game changer for their users. Would any wise person prefer driving a private vehicle over using the metro if he knew that he would arrive noticeably sooner?
When it comes to solving the congestion problems, the role of the people is not negligible. Although they have every right to choose their transportation option, they are able to lessen the traffic issues by using the existing public transportation systems or a bicycle. Also, they have the ability to motivate their friends and family members to use such options. Studies indicate that since the Dutch people use their bicycles to commute within their cities, Holland experiences 70 percent less traffic jams compared to the UK.
To conclude, by synergism, we are able to overcome all of our everyday complications. While the main burden is on the governments’ shoulders as they have to improve the existing infrastructure, people have the same amount of responsibility amongst solving the rising congestion issues by using public transportation systems.
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- You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. 73
- With an increase in the number of privately owned vehicles, roads are becoming more congested. What measures could both government and individuals take to deal with this situation? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 322, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'would' requires base form of the verb: 'reduce'
Suggestion: reduce
...w train and bus stations would not only reduces the traffic issues by attracting more c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47810218978 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16072933365 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609489051095 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9558523616 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.461538462 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.84615384615 7.06120827912 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0804258086306 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0299986359787 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547507399339 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0595228680514 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680484309325 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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