With an increase in the number of privately owned vehicles, roads are becoming more congested. What measures could both government and individuals take to deal with this situation?
An increasing number of personally owned vehicles are currently having a negative impact on traffic congestion. this problem has caused by several factors, and it should be tackled by both individual and government.
there are some reasons why people prefer to possess their own means of transports. one of the first reason is that having private transport can be very convenient when it comes to traveling for a long distance. living in canada, for instance, is a good example in this case as it is a must to own a car there because people are usually living far away from the city to save expense when most of the decent jobs are available in town. Another reason worth mentioning is that public transports are not popular in many parts of developing countries; therefore, people have difficulties to travel from their places to their purposed destination. Not only is the availability of public transports scarce, but also waiting times are unacceptably long. In some remote areas, for example, Niagara falls in canada, there is only one bus every one hour to go from downtown to the falls.
Fortunately, some measures can be taken to lessen the negative effects of this problem. The first solution would be to invest more money on public transports so that people could travel straightforwardly to the destination without the need of using their own vehicles. As a result, there are fewer cars traveling within city during rush hours as people have efficient alternatives which even cost them less money. In addition, the government should impose heavy taxes on cars so that fewer people could afford to purchase them. Consequently, people will deliberate more thoughtfully before making a decision in relation to the car's possession. individuals could also contribute to the decrease in traffic congestion by simply not driving during peak hours.
In conclusion, people want to have their own vehicles due to the lack of convenience and availability of public transports. both government and individual should hold accountable for implementing the above indicated solutions to tackle this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1764.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15789473684 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87040396198 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56432748538 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7344726955 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.25 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3125 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145208731406 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507964652979 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436556068935 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108504742779 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508784304981 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.