Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others. Do you agree or disagree?
Television also called as the ‘idiot box’ across the globe, has been an important asset of a family since the time it is invented. Although sticking to the television has ample disadvantages, people all over the world prefer spending their time in front of it when they are free. This essay will discuss the above trend in detail and give my opinion at the end.
In today’s world of a competitive market, the entertainment industry has been ever-glowing. This advancement has given people many choices to select a channel of their interest. Not only one can get the information of any happenings all over the world, but also get relaxed and stress-free by watching entertaining serials to lighten up their mood. Furthermore, there are also international channels depicting real life documentaries leading people to utilize their free time by watching television.
Despite the fact that the television has abundant information to provide to public, there are also negative factors which can eventually harm the social life of an individual. It is obviously clear that more and more people are getting addicted to television and ultimately ending up being very lazy. If a person is adamant on watching serials or news in their pass times, it is ultimately going to ruin their fitness level at some or the other point. Moreover, harmful rays are emitted from the screen which can have detrimental effects on their eyes as well.
From my perspective, I strongly opine that television has ruined the social life of a person where communication among the family members has been deteriorated. Also, with so much information provided with just a click of a button makes a person lazy and he ultimately avoids physical activities. This progression will affect his health life and also his social life altogether. Hence, it becomes essential for a person to realize the time the information is over loaded and taking the decision of switching off the television at the right time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09174311927 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90129143325 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571865443425 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1962040551 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53333333333 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16372348683 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540399890693 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382069566129 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.098375899774 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0136140816026 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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