many people believe that its better to learn something in a group rather that individually. do you agree or disagree?
In this era, due to high competition in the garment industry, people are prone to various options in buying clothes. it is believed, different attires makes people behave variedly as per their comfort zone. As far as I am concerned, I completely agree to the point and will give my examples in the following passages.
To embark upon, each individual have their own comfort level in dressing, one who feels comfortable in his clothing will definitely behave in a better manner than the one who is uncomfortable and conscious about their attire. For instance, when the person knows he looks good in a particular attire or believes it is lucky for him, everytime he wears that he would behave in a very happy and positive mood.
traditional and modern clothing also makes one feel different. In a traditional attire, like a saree it is expected that the girl behaves in a very elegant manner and she does. Whereas , in a modern attire like jeans tshirt, she will be very casual and comfortable in her own way. Moreover, in a sports dress one expects to be active and alert and futhermore, in the night dress one may behave lazy and sleepy making the person behave differently.
To put it in nutshell, the behaviour of a person definitely varies as per his clothing making it a vital part of choosing the garment as per the situation and interests. mood swings vary as per varied attire making people to behave in a certain manner. Hence, it affects his mental stability and ultimately resulting in different behaviour.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: It
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Suggestion: Traditional
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...ery elegant manner and she does. Whereas , in a modern attire like jeans tshirt, s...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a sport' or simply 'sports'?
Suggestion: a sport; sports
...omfortable in her own way. Moreover, in a sports dress one expects to be active and aler...
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Suggestion: Mood
...ent as per the situation and interests. mood swings vary as per varied attire making...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, may, moreover, so, whereas, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1262.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79847908745 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6907806924 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558935361217 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6669642848 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.166666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0441805720852 0.244688304435 18% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0173625832499 0.084324248473 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0182442697285 0.0667982634062 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0307084552425 0.151304729494 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259329815164 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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