Crime rates increasing in developed countries causes and solutions
Since the dawn of humanity, the crime rates have been subsequently increasing in a faster pace especially in the developed countries. The quality of life has been deteriorated ultimately resulting in detrimental effects to the society as a whole. This essay will examine the reason for this phenomenon and also give suggestions to improve the current condition.
First of all, due to inflation the price level of basic needs of living has been reaching heights making the poor class of the society to attempt a crime to fulfill their livelihood. Globalization, on the other hand has led to rich getting richer and poor getting poorer. Hence, inculcating the poor to attempt for robbery and become thieves to raise their affordability. Secondly, advancements in digitization in developed countries has resulted in cyber crimes giving the hackers an opportunity to rob digitally. For instance, there has been a bank fraud recently due to hacking causing the rates of crimes to increase.
Despite the above causes, there are certain regulations which can be implemented to solve this dilemma like by giving severe punishments to the crimes which will eventually lower the crime rates. Also, the government can initiate campaigns using media to educate the people regarding the crimes occurring and how to be safe and take proper preventive measures to avoid the same. Therefore, making the people alert and careful at individual level.
To sum up, digitization and globalization has definitely resulted in alarming increase in crime rates in well developed countries but there are measures which can be taken by the bureaucrats as well as by an individual to reduce it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ions to improve the current condition. First of all, due to inflation the price...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, as well as, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23791821561 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91688222799 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57249070632 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7272342472 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.416666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.25 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276805058937 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878907869465 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0993776412319 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160940424029 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612637961785 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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