Individuals can do nothing to improve environment, only governments and large companies can make a difference.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Individuals can do nothing to improve environment, only governments and large companies can make a difference.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is a quite popular belief that the environmental problem can only be tackled by big organizations like authorities and giant corporations. In my view, I totally oppose this statement as every single person must have the responsibility to protect the earth - our mutual home.

I cannot deny that the governments and large businesses play an important role in the process of preserving the environment. In terms of administration, they can enforce some principles and prohibitions to prevent pessimistic human activities which are considered to be a burden to the natural surroundings. Regarding giant companies, they should do more research to manufacture environmentally-friendly products with recycled covers such as fabric, glass, instead of using plastic bag. In addition, they should make a change in reducing the exhausted fume they have released to the atmosphere. To take Singapore as an example, recognized as the cleanest city in the planet, whose governments has executed the laws to ban and punish any wrongdoings that have a bad impact on environment. It is obvious that governments and big corporations have their own duties to save the world surroundings from harm.

Human activities are the main cause of the depression of the environment and also the key factor to solve this problem. Everybody has to have a proper understanding of how their negative activities affect their surroundings, then, focus their good effort in taking some actions for the better world. For instance, with their certain cognition, the people can classify their household waste which can help to reduce some stages in disposal process. Moreover, it is better to commute by public transport than the private one because it can lead to the decline of toxic air that the earth has to shoulder.

To sum up, both authorities, large companies and civilians have the outstanding contribution to the business of preserving the environment. Personally, the close association between those organisations and the citizens is the best measure to address this worldwide problem effectively.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, as to, for instance, in addition, such as, in my view, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36697247706 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28645385275 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611620795107 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.0067691345 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 125.357142857 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3571428571 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158545823589 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492206083451 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399681358922 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0846260242227 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271901351346 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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