Some people believe that children are given too much freetime. They feel that this time should be used to do more school work. How do you think children should spend their free time? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Many people think that youngsters are having so much leisure time and this time could be spent with more school work. I think that school work is crucial for children but spending free time on other activities may be more beneficial for them.
Some people suggest that children should spend their free time on school work. Although this suggestion is beneficial for their grades, this can lead to some problems. For instance, children who are forced to do more homework in their free time are becoming less sociable. Also more work increases their stress level so allowing them to be free in their leisure time may lead to an increase in their happiness.
I think that children should spend their free time with their friends in the parks or they can spend their time on activities that they enjoy doing the most. Playing in the park with their friends contributes to their social skills in a positive way. Also, they can do a variety of things that they enjoy such as, playing with their toys or drawing pictures. These activities may increase their creativity. Another benefit of having free time without extra school work could be that children may find hobbies that are enjoyable to do. So there are many fun and enjoyable activities that kids can do in their free time to keep them fruitfully occupied.
In conclusion, even though studying for school work in children’s free time could be useful, there are also negative sides to that choice and spending time on other activities like playing with friends or spending time on art could have more positive impacts on them.
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- A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend.In your letter: give contact details for when you are away give instructions on how to care for your pet describe other household duties 75
- During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter 73
- Some people believe that children are given too much freetime. They feel that this time should be used to do more school work. How do you think children should spend their free time? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from you 73
- Some people believe that children are given too much freetime. They feel that this time should be used to do more school work. How do you think children should spend their free time? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from you 56
- During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...their free time on school work. Although this suggestion is beneficial for their ...
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Line 3, column 275, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...r free time are becoming less sociable. Also more work increases their stress level ...
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Line 5, column 233, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ends contributes to their social skills in a positive way. Also, they can do a variety of things ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, so, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84926470588 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34573517427 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.4375 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2244163305 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.461538462 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.411440501644 0.244688304435 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.192453510269 0.084324248473 228% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110540659953 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.295909100406 0.151304729494 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574785775706 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.