The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in govemment, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Today's society is changing their perception about how to prepare young people for leadership in various fields, today's society thinks that devloping a sense of cooperation is better than competition but the society is ignoring many of the benefits that a sense of competition can provide in devlopement of leadership quality of child.
Therefore, inistilling a sense of cooperation insted of competition is not a best way for a society to prepare young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields.
Instilling a sense of cooperation insted of competition will restrain the want to give their best and work harder than their competion. someone who have a good competitor work harder and more diligently to be better that their competition, this will devlope a sense hardwork, preservance and to improve yourself and always focus on your goal which is one of the main quality of a good leaderHaving a competitor not only devlopes a sense of hardwork to become better than everyone but also teach you how to learn from your competitor and process of learning somethin new everyday will eventually help them to become a better leader in any given field.
A very good examle to depict that competion can help you to be the best version of yourself is the constructive competition between the two famous artists Piccaso and Martiz.
A sense of competition can also devlope a sense of ill will and hate in young people towards their competitor.
Today's society is focusing in instilling a sense of cooperation isted of competition in young people which leading young people to lack abilities devloped by sense of competi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 76, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ooperation insted of competition is not a best way for a society to prepare young...
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Line 3, column 136, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Someone
...t and work harder than their competion. someone who have a good competitor work harder ...
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Line 3, column 570, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...or and process of learning somethin new everyday will eventually help them to become a b...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, still, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 2235.4752809 61% => OK
No of words: 271.0 442.535393258 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0442804428 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88780694115 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 215.323595506 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468634686347 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 704.065955056 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 23.0359550562 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 132.907977986 60.3974514979 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 195.285714286 118.986275619 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.7142857143 23.4991977007 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322515824473 0.243740707755 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180138139812 0.0831039109588 217% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150807964287 0.0758088955206 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200230434238 0.150359130593 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.154038853293 0.0667264976115 231% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.7 14.1392134831 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.91 48.8420337079 67% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 12.1743820225 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 100.480337079 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 11.2143820225 153% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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