You took a two days course. Write a feedback to course organizer.
In your letter, you should tell:
what details of the course are,
what you like
what you want to them to do to make it better.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Yasmeen Kaur. I have recently taken a course of personality development from your Skill training centre on 28 and 29 August for a duration of 5 hours. Let me elaborate on this.
Initially, the whole course was divided into two parts: speaking and body language. On the first day, the host has made us familiar with how to speak precisely and briefly in front of the people. Besides this, in another section, the main attendant had
provided us worksheets to write a report on ethics and etiquettes. It was the most intriguing part of the event as we were recognized with how to behave and speak efficiently with a congenial mannerism.
Secondly, on another day we were taught how to make the exact posture of the body in front of the third person. Moreover, the lessons of standing erectly, sitting postures as well as shaking habits with abilities to confidence, well-mannered, perfect dressing and so on were quite impressive too. Lastly, the visual presentation on the overall development of body and language was resourceful and made me learn a lot of things.
At the end of the day, my weekend course was meaningful. Furthermore, I have learnt numerous ideas and ways through which I can interact with my co-workers and influence my friends. Needless to say, everything was on the top notch except the sitting facility. In other words, there only chairs to seat with no side table. As a result, it was quite hard to write any notes or writing. I have seen some of the participants were managed to write by putting the paper on a thigh of the leg while sitting on the chair. I would appreciate if you could better think of your sitting arrangements for the attendants when they want to do the writing.
I hope you will address these concerns until the next event.
Yours sincerely,
jasmin kaur
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-08-11 | Sarab.rathor4@gmail.com | 76 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 87, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Line 6, column 221, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: top-notch
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Line 6, column 396, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...write any notes or writing. I have seen some of the participants were managed to write by p...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ants when they want to do the writing. I hope you will address these concerns un...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, briefly, first, furthermore, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, well, while, as a result, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 26.3917525773 186% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 937.175257732 162% => OK
No of words: 320.0 206.0 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73125 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 3.78020617076 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71005073753 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 127.690721649 153% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6125 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 290.88556701 160% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8283955822 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6842105263 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8421052632 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42105263158 4.34317383033 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13276250146 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0369296452521 0.0766984524023 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489562984902 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0621606873213 0.12726935374 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404951587013 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 41.2886597938 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.