You have a spare room in your apartment, you would like to rent out to a college student. Write a letter to student accommodation officer of local college.
In your letter, you should tell:
where it is
explain about the room
to which type of student you would like to give.
Dear sir/Madam
My name is amit mishra. I am writing this letter because I am looking for tenant of my house. I would be thankful to the arrange student for this apartment. The house loaction in magarpatta society pune. this apartment 10th floor of building and size of flat 2600 square feet and consist of three masterbad rooms , one large kitchen ,a store room and balcony this is very big and elegent and flat proper maintain interior colour beautiful and expensieve furniture with laending brand, the furniture of quailities of both steel and wood.This apartment provide all type amenties.
I would like to prefer those type of student polite person , non somker and friendly nature, mostly focus on study and his life. I don,t like student to prefer late night , somkeing loud music in the house. I am assure to you comfortable enivorment for the student.
I look forward to hearing from you.
yours sincerely
amit mishra
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ant of my house. I would be thankful to the arrange student for this apartment. The house l...
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Line 3, column 205, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...se loaction in magarpatta society pune. this apartment 10th floor of building and si...
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Line 3, column 313, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...eet and consist of three masterbad rooms , one large kitchen ,a store room and bal...
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Line 3, column 333, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...hree masterbad rooms , one large kitchen ,a store room and balcony this is very bi...
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Line 3, column 537, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...re of quailities of both steel and wood.This apartment provide all type amenties. ...
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Line 3, column 552, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'provides'.
Suggestion: provides
...s of both steel and wood.This apartment provide all type amenties. I would like to ...
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Line 5, column 59, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...efer those type of student polite person , non somker and friendly nature, mostly ...
^^
Line 5, column 135, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , t
...ostly focus on study and his life. I don,t like student to prefer late night , som...
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Line 5, column 171, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... don,t like student to prefer late night , somkeing loud music in the house. I am ...
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Line 5, column 208, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ght , somkeing loud music in the house. I am assure to you comfortable enivorment...
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Line 5, column 213, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'assured'.
Suggestion: assured
... somkeing loud music in the house. I am assure to you comfortable enivorment for the s...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...fortable enivorment for the student. I look forward to hearing from you. yo...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
... I look forward to hearing from you. yours sincerely amit mishra
^^^^^
Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to hearing from you. yours sincerely amit mishra
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 787.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0127388535 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46531406468 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.694267515924 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 97.34166631 44.8134815571 217% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 78.7 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.2 4.34317383033 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229892477097 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886019262327 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671753732583 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150744243467 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584865840802 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.