Nowadays in many countries women have full-time jobs. Therefore, it is logical to share household tasks evenly between men and women. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In this 21st century, both genders are doing permanent jobs in several regions of the world, hence, it is rational to distribute household tasks equally among female and male. I completely agree with the nation and believe that it enhances relationship bonding between family members and makes everyone capable of all household duties.
To begin with, sharing household activities in all make the family members independent and more competent. Participation in all home tasks by members of the family provides the opportunity to each member become multitasking individual and decreases the dependency on others. Furthermore, there is no rule and regulations that specific members of the house should do specific tasks, thus everybody should put their hands in helping each other. Thus, the distribution of home tasks equally is a rational approach especially when both genders are earning for a family.
Similarly, it creates a strong emotional and caring bond between family members when all support each other in different activities of the home. The balance of home tasks creates more place for respect and value for each member. In other words, putting pressure on one family member for all the tasks generate a psychological imbalance in the house. For instance, depending on working wife for all household activities increase the workload for one individual, consequently weaken the bond between the couple due to biasedness. Therefore each individual should understand the responsibility of other members and support them whenever they are in need to maintain a healthy environment in the home.
In conclusion, I agree with the nation because of the reasons mentioned in the above paragraphs. In addition to that, we should raise voice against families who do not support equal distribution of tasks between men and women to strengthen the moral of working women.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, hence, if, similarly, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35135135135 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85541531828 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540540540541 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7935276804 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.846153846 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6923076923 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137258462361 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560456169494 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497848902665 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111636930189 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643313827831 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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