What are the pros and cons of staying connected on social media for 24 hours a day.?
These days, there are substantive controversies about staying twenty-four hours connection on social media. The vast majority of people opine that advantages and disadvantages out of it. However, others refute this supposition and think that it has adverse ramifications. In my view, I have strong belief that through relevant surveys and observations for pros and cons of staying connected on media will remorse humans daily life. through this essay, it will elucidate the pertinent points of view to substantiate my assertion.
To begin with, there are multifarious reasons and cogent arguments that can shore up the implied notion. Firstly, as pros it will expound social awareness thru the latest technology because such application like Facebook and Instagram show what is in current up to this day. In other words, person will be updated in the current trends and upcoming technology. For instance, a study from a technical analyst rendered that most people who give much on time of social media became expert on it.
Furthermore, another justification for upholding this proposition is the fact that it creates disadvantages such as neglecting individual's personal needs. Certainly, for cons it will not affect health condition but also it will infiltrate emotion's state. As a matter of fact, due to spending much time on computers or phones we tend to set aside our responsibilities at home and being more aggressive emotionally.
To cite a prime example, a study from psychologist commend that a family member disengages from reading books, being irrationally responsive and lacks interest on education.
In summary, this essay discussed about pros and cons on keeping yourself in social media daily. In my opinion, even though it is favorably and considerably proven that advantages will cause you to be socially aware there will always be such as disadvantages that will counter one’s health which is primary wealth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, for instance, in summary, such as, as a matter of fact, in my opinion, in my view, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 20.9802955665 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1207.87684729 136% => OK
No of words: 306.0 242.827586207 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36928104575 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98730171717 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 139.433497537 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630718954248 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 379.143842365 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1027979583 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.533333333 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2666666667 7.25397266985 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262876835822 0.242375264174 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790076137905 0.0925447433944 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0988828081796 0.071462118173 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121228599562 0.151781067708 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0863570629779 0.0609392437508 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 55.0591133005 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.