What are the pros and cons of staying connected on social media for 24 hours a day.?
It is needless to say that the technological advancements have outpaced mankind. Some people believe that staying connected on social media has various merits, while others think that social media has adverse effects on people. This essay will discuss how staying connected on social media will prove to be useful to humans.
Unarguably, the advent of internet has made communication easier among people. Moreover, many people nowadays, get along with their friends whom they have lost contacts after graduation. For instance, the social networking sites like skype and facebook have helped people to connect to their friends and find relationships online. Thus, it is clear that staying connected on social media has led to growing relationships among people of all age groups.
On the other hand, staying connected on social media for 24 hours a day has posed a caveat for young populations. Children who are glued to the screens all the time more often access the forbidden sites on internet. For instance, posting images on social sites lead to child abuse and pornography. Hence, the unrestricted access of social media has led to some serious consequences on children.
This essay discussed how communication is greatly increased with the help of social media and how staying connected on social media needs addressal. In my opinion, access to social media has provided a remarkable tool of communicating and interacting with each other.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, moreover, so, thus, while, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1224.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 231.0 242.827586207 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2987012987 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76175548186 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 139.433497537 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554112554113 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.6475601404 50.4703680194 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.1538461538 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7692307692 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.25397266985 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380925139122 0.242375264174 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137937342141 0.0925447433944 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13629511204 0.071462118173 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238955648417 0.151781067708 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697759544763 0.0609392437508 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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