A friend has agreed to lokkk after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend, in your letter-
- Give contact details for when you are away
- Give instructions about how you to care your pet
- Describe other household duties
Dear Prashant,
How are you? I hope you are doing great. Firstly, I really want to thank you for your valuable support to me. I am pleased about what you are doing for me and my house while I am on my trip. Thanks a lot.
I want to give you some details, you can contact me on my personal number (9867555463) or on email (sammy@gmail.com) when there is any emergency. I know you are completely familiar with my house as we spend many nights together but please look after my dog Emmy. All required products are on the desk near sofa. Feed Emmy twice a day and take her out in the evening for the walk. Give her a nice bath daily and play with her at least for 20 minutes.
There are some other things i want to mention. You know that i have a small garden in the balcony so water the plants once a day. Although, list of work is quite long but, friends are for that only. I am kidding but you are totally aware that how crucial this trip is for me and my career.
I will definitely buy some souvenirs as well as your favourite candies for you while returning home. Till then enjoy with Emmy. When I will come back we will go for the night out and party. Contact me any time. Love.
Your's,
Sammy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 29, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...minutes. There are some other things i want to mention. You know that i have a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, look, really, so, then, well, while, at least, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 974.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.16239316239 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14725623265 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602564102564 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6486919804 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 54.1111111111 76.5299724578 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277505943326 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749929479945 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639548083388 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169366603058 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455667251171 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.7 8.37731958763 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.96 8.71597938144 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.64 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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