People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?
You should give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.
These days colleges and universities have become a crucial part of the education system. Immediately after completing schooling the next question pops-up is, which university or college? And this mindset is developed because of various reasons someone wants to join college for enhanced knowledge and few for job opportunities and rest for just an experience. The following paragraphs will give you a glance of my opinion on the above statement.
First and foremost, admission to a college or university is in trend. Therefore, most of the parents and students they already have this in their mind, before completing their schooling. Secondly, to get into jobs graduation or post-graduation are required at the company level. Hence, for more career opportunities graduation from colleges is in demand. Moreover, while college you some more time to think and plan ahead for your future. Finally, exposure is another aspect which cannot be neglected here. Schooling is just a basic level of education after schooling a depth level of knowledge is indeed required to excel in a particular field. Which is why college seems important to everyone.
Furthermore, if I would like to share my experience college is the correct place to shape your future and dreams. I would not deny that when I started college it was more of my parents and my elder brother's decision than mine. However, now when I am a passed out student from a reputed university I can see a difference in me. College is not a place just for educational exposure it gives you other life lessons as well. Mostly, graduation is the first time when you leave your parents and start leaving on your own. There is financial support from parents but sharing room with stranger later become friends, taking care of your own meals, health, and clothing, teaches you a lot.
Finally, from my point of view, the main reason to attend colleges or universities is to become independent. Along with education college life provides you several lessons of sense of responsibility that you have towards your family.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 303, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'opportunities'' or 'opportunity's'?
Suggestion: opportunities'; opportunity's
...e company level. Hence, for more career opportunities graduation from colleges is in demand. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05847953216 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79300229209 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573099415205 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.9664812749 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352353716182 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100697043678 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711282596802 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224211886855 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305039556477 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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