Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Although many people hold the view that people learn other languages only because of their travels and jobs which have been in abroad, the other insist that reason are not mere reasons. This essay will examine both side of the debates and propound my partial reasons to announce my affirmative opinion with former idea.
In nowadays societies, because of variety factors, individuals should study overseas languages, on the ground following reasons:
First and foremost cause is people for being up-dated and successful in their own occupations or life, they have to use new methods or progressed one, which never happened but they investigate and usually those are in other languages. Thus, if they know that language, they will be able to utilize those techniques. Secondly, most of students should give some lectures or some researches as a thesis for their graduations, and usually the most essays are written in other languages, especially English language. So they should learn it for gathering the best resources and information. Thirdly, learning foreign languages not only are companies have to use for expanding their communications, but also use it for best-sellers, which has been essential for being permanent in the market. To exemplify, companies should sell their products in global market, so they should find the best one. It could not be fulfill accept having supportive and strong international language.
On the other hand, most common people have not reasons which have been mentioned in advance. They learn new languages for their travels or working in other country. Although these reasons have the most portion of these issue, those are not the only factors.
In conclusion, in my personal opinion, not only is not the first aspect the only reasons, but also those are two of the most commons, and the most significant reason is making communication between civilizations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: Nowadays
...ffirmative opinion with former idea. In nowadays societies, because of variety factors, ...
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Line 4, column 327, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the students') or simply say ''most students''.
Suggestion: most of the students; most students
... to utilize those techniques. Secondly, most of students should give some lectures or some resea...
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Line 9, column 22, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...e only factors. In conclusion, in my personal opinion, not only is not the first aspect the o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34098360656 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70795457974 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531147540984 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.294482589 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.307692308 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283244171651 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106471690364 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788413849329 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14959479083 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872315866882 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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