The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.
The table shows the information on the underground railway systems, the year the railway system was initiated and the number of people traveling per year for six cities.
Generally, London has the longest route and it becomes one of the oldest underground railway systems.On the other hand, Los Angles still gains less popularity and it is the latest as it opened since 2001 and covers the second least railway route with of 28 km.
As is presented in the table, Tokyo railway service had the largest number of passengers which controlled the largest share with about 1927 million people annually in 1927. Unlike the other railway services, Kyoto consists of the least number of travelers with only 45 million people. Paris and Tokyo railway services are alike that they both are very popular and they also have more passengers than other railway systems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: On
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, second, so, still, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 32.9175257732 18% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 717.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 143.0 206.0 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01398601399 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45807182446 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33832184145 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 127.690721649 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622377622378 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 16.3608247423 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.7070014889 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.4 76.5299724578 187% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6 16.8248392259 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 4.34317383033 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250035484976 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129916604468 0.0766984524023 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122123508256 0.0603063233224 203% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186061712198 0.12726935374 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131889214707 0.0580467560999 227% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 8.37731958763 197% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 70.7449484536 73% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 7.45979381443 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.2 8.54432989691 154% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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