Write a letter to your local council that the street you are living has become dirty lately.
In your letter, you should tell:
why it is happening
what problems it will cause
what your suggestions are.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Yasmin Kaur, the local resident of your cranberry city and writing to bring your attention towards the city's destitute and miserable conditions of the road. Let me elaborate in details.
To be more specific, the prime cause is the ongoing construction for the super mall on the road. Firstly, it is a colossal building which requires a couple of months to build up. Consequently, the construction labourer uses forklifts, turbines and massive machines on a daily basis has made the road conditions shabby and tear out. Secondly, building materials such as mud, cement bags, broken tiles and other garbage is scattered all over the sides of the road. As a result, the children are the main targets of falling sick due to the heap of garbage, dirt and gravel. Lastly, bulky equipment materials often fall off leading to breakage of the road. Ultimately, this will demand repairment of roads soon in future. Besides this, the budget of making and repairing the road standards will directly affect our disposable income. The government will charge us against the heinous road conditions in spite of these moneymakers of big projects.
At the end of the day, I would highly appreciate if you could restrict the making of a super mall in the residential area.
Also, the damage made to the road should be covered from these lofty businessmen instead of the innocent public.
Hopefully, you will pay immediate attention to this matter as earliest as possible.
Your's sincerely,
Yasmin Kaur.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 360, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d tear out. Secondly, building materials such as mud, cement bags, broken tiles a...
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Line 4, column 708, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...is will demand repairment of roads soon in future. Besides this, the budget of making and...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ble. Yours sincerely, Yasmin Kaur.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, such as, as a result, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 937.175257732 136% => OK
No of words: 253.0 206.0 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02766798419 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66592513137 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648221343874 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 290.88556701 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 7.0 0.824742268041 849% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9163569925 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8666666667 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 4.34317383033 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114052937751 0.216113520407 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0363776024058 0.0766984524023 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514734674563 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0670349071929 0.12726935374 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504424526706 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 41.2886597938 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.