whether it is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends
Just as erudite mentors nourish our minds, so do friends have influential impact over our lives. From childhood to adulthood, we meet people form all walks of lives. some may be merely passers-by, while others may become lifelong partners. Nowadays, there is a heated debate about whether it is more pivotal to keep old friends than to meet new friends. In my perspective, I definitely vote for the statement, and the following paragraphs will vindicate my viewpoint.
To begin with, old friends are those who understand you the most. They realize what you would like to and how are you going. they may play as a psychological mentor when we encounter obstacles and help us with our homework. To illustrate, recently I have been really stressed out since piles of exhaust and disturb a lot, and I am considering my career as well. Thus, I call my best friend for help, and he analyze every choice and situation where I am stuck. Astoundingly, he know what my really want because he has met me since we were eight years old. Besides, he also comfort me and tell me just relax. Those above are what the friends that have know for a long period of time can do. I am certain that I will not tell such a private matter with acquaintances.
Secondly, when friends can keep contact with each other, it means they all have common interests, thus they possessing boundless topics and gossips to share. Take myself, for instance. I used to be a member of pop dance club in the school. Hence, I play with the members there and know them deeply with time. Now, even though I go to the club seldom due to the heavy schoolwork. I still hang out with them often, sitting in the coffee shop and chatting with each other till the store is closed.
Admittedly, it is also crucial to know new friends, especially when we are college students, in that we can expand our social circle and strengthen social skills. We should also bear in mind, however, that the principles of making friends do not mean to meet lots of friends to shape the image that we are the popular and outgoing, but to teach us
to reinforce the friendship.
In a nutshell, although new friends actually assist us boost the social zoom and we may benefit if we know lots of friends from all walks of lives, the true friends are those who keep the friendship with us for long time. Therefore, That is why I subscribe to the arguement. (431words/33mins)
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- Rembrandt 3
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, hence, however, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1977.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 431.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58700696056 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55530080017 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549883990719 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.298411063 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.375 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9583333333 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45833333333 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22900421021 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574513609824 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100451792977 0.0737576698707 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112857261481 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759371829861 0.0645574589148 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.