You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel.
• say how you feel about his/her performance
• give details of your music-related activities
• explain how you would like him/her to help you with your music-related activities
Dear Mr. Johns,
I am writing with regards to the last concert which was held on the National theater hall in terms of your recent album. I bought the concert ticket by one of my friends’ recommendation and I am absolutely happy because I really enjoyed your performance. I had such a great time. Your performance was very eye-catching and amusing.
A real reason for writing this letter is to ask you for some recommendation. Actually, I play guitar and I am a member of a local music band. We used to perform at some local event and festivals. Since I have always have a dream of being a famous guitarist, I really appreciate it if you could provide me some guidance to make progress. Could you suggest me some repute musical class to take?
I think taking part in those classes, under supervision of knowledgeable teachers, bring a new set of positive consequences. First of all, I can learn more technic and improve my abilities. Another thing is about getting know to other musician and finding more opportunities to get promotion.
I look forward to hear from you. Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours sincerely
Yalda Asgar.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Johns, I am writing with regards to the last co...
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Line 4, column 217, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...vent and festivals. Since I have always have a dream of being a famous guitarist, I ...
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Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...ies to get promotion. I look forward to hear from you. Thank you for your time and c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, if, look, really, so, another thing, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 964.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96674906253 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.5361841103 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.2666666667 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3333333333 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222104812825 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695616267352 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659542571226 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131712589142 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0897919171919 0.0580467560999 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.