A year ago, you became a member of your local film club. You have decided that you do not want to continue your membership for another year.
Write a letter to the club secretary. In your letter
state what type of membership you have and how you have paid for this give details about the benefits you have had from being a member of the club explain why you have decided not to renew your membership Write at least 150 words.
Dear Mr Peter,
It has been an honour to be a part of your film club since last year as I have learned a lot from this place. The purpose of writing this missive is to withdraw my membership because of some personal reasons.
While enrolling for the Prime membership, it was my ultimate objective to learn basic skills of acting. I have to say that it was an inexplicable experience being a student here and the investment was worth a million dollars. The first year premium was two hundred dollars, including taxes, and I found it value for money.
The prime enrolment comes up with the plethora of benefits such as acting classes, passes of night shows and a ticket to The National Film Festival. Although I was busy throughout the year and was not able to extract the best out of your firm, it was one of the mesmerising moments to be a part of the film festival. Additionally, it was memorable to participate in The Hamlet last summer, where I performed on the stage for the first time.
Despite the commendable services of this institute, it is regrettable to express that I have been transferred to a new city, which gives me no choice but to relocate next month.
Hoping to be a part of this remarkable facility again.
Kind Regards,
Charanjit Nanda
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 307, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'values'?
Suggestion: values
...ollars, including taxes, and I found it value for money. The prime enrolment comes...
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Line 14, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...again. Kind Regards, Charanjit Nanda
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.48453608247 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1053.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6592920354 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67916974175 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606194690265 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.1910256409 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7272727273 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133687844181 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455485299932 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450120229151 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0688691846372 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541340519178 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 41.2886597938 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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