Write a letter to your local council that the street you are living has become dirty lately.why it is happening ?what problem will it cause ?what would you suggest ?

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Write a letter to your local council that the street you are living has become dirty lately.
why it is happening ?
what problem will it cause ?
what would you suggest ?

I am kusahl rana, a resident of B.P extention, writing on behalf of our community members to express our discontent with the sanitation facilities.

First of all, we really appreciate the effort and hard work done by the staff of local council to manage the garbage from our locality. But in the past few days we have seen a huge deterioration in the cleanliness drive, resulting into overflow of trace bins. In addition to it, the flow of lanes has stopped as they are filled with rubbish and no one there to look after this issue.

Moreover, overflowing containers has become a breeding grounds for mosquitoes, houseflies and other insects. there is strong possibility of seasonal disease. So far, more than ten cases of dengue has been reported.

As a viable solution, please make sure your staff clean the garbage bins every single day both in morning and evening. i would also request you to provide bins with different colours for the segregation of waste.

I hope you will consider my suggestions and take immediate action to solve the problems.

Yours faithfully,
Kushal rana

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: P
I am kusahl rana, a resident of B.P extention, writing on behalf of our com...
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Suggestion: There
...squitoes, houseflies and other insects. there is strong possibility of seasonal disea...
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Line 7, column 120, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...single day both in morning and evening. i would also request you to provide bins ...
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Line 7, column 120, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...single day both in morning and evening. i would also request you to provide bins ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, really, so, in addition, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 917.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98369565217 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69823136605 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.739130434783 0.622605031667 119% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3388551924 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3636363636 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7272727273 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 4.34317383033 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121192550991 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0385852926318 0.0766984524023 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043046147818 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0591882133494 0.12726935374 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457986692804 0.0580467560999 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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