Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of biodiversity.
What are the primary causes of loss of biodiversity?
What solutions can you suggest?
For centuries, human beings and other species have coexisted peacefully on Earth. However, in recent times, despite knowing about biodiversity's importance, human activity has caused massive extinctions of different living creatures. There are a few possible methods that will reduce the impact of man-made problems on the world's ecosphere.
The two main reasons of animal and plant extinction are changes to their natural habitations and overexploitation of natural resources. When humans artificially transform the environment, they destroy vegetation and animals' original living conditions. For instance, to build new roads people cut down trees and cement the soil, altering the environment. Because of this, lot of species suffer and eventually die out. Also, when activities connected with capturing and cultivating a natural resource are too intense in a particular area, the resources become exhausted. For example, overfishing doesn't leave enough time for fish to breed and makes them eventually disappear. Thus, human actions often deplete local flora and fauna and cause destruction of biodiversity.
Some probable solutions to this problem are protection nature and promoting awareness among the public. By protecting areas where human activity is limited and avoiding overexploitation of its resources, we can save the untouched environment and help the survival of other species. Furthermore, the next step in preventing loss of ecosystem is informing the general population about the dangers of this problem. This way, people will be more conscious about the nature and won't overuse or destroy its resources.
To conclude, public actions that alter the environment have negative impact on the world's ecosystem. However, by protecting the grasslands and natural areas, and enlightening people about the problems, the extinction of other species can be minimized significantly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ome exhausted. For example, overfishing doesnt leave enough time for fish to breed and...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...environment have negative impact on the worlds ecosystem. However, by protecting the g...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78214285714 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03313125401 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.342768393 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.1875 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1875 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17284488879 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518279089449 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400398439065 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109561921892 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346936200301 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.95 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.