The graph below shows average house prices in four Massachusetts towns from 1988 to 2002 (in US dollars.)Summarize the information selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph below shows average house prices in four Massachusetts towns from 1988 to 2002 (in US dollars.)
Summarize the information selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Submitted by dearatyp on Fri, 08/16/2019 - 03:52

The house prices average of four towns in Massachusetts between 1988 and 2002 is given in the line graph. The data is measured in US dollars. Overall, it can be clearly seen that by the end of the period, all figures fell down excepted for Cambridge’s figure.

To begin, the figure started about 220,000 in both Cambridge and Duxbury’s figure in 1988. Then, there was a gradual fluctuation around 250,000 from 1988 to 1995 in both towns. After that, Cambridge’s figure rose significantly, in 1995, to reach a peak of roughly 580,000 in 2002 which continued to do so. In contrast, Duxbury’s figure increased sharply between 1995 and 2001 from 220,000 to 420,000 before there was a unfortunated drop in 2001 until the end of 2002.

On the other hand, from 1988 to 1995, there was a slight fluctuation around 150,000 in Framingham and Milford’s figures before both figures climbed minimally to 280,000 and 240,000 in Framingham and Milford respectively. Finally, there was a steady decline in 2001 in both towns throughout the period.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 433, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...rom 220,000 to 420,000 before there was a unfortunated drop in 2001 until the end...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, then, in contrast, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 1615.20841683 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 174.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12068965517 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06285176042 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 176.041082164 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580459770115 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 506.74238477 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7317391889 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132863242822 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806240065682 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108768825464 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118051520912 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0939649116911 0.056905535591 165% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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