Children’s education is expensive. In some countries, governments pay partly or all education fees. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
It is true that school tuition fees are so expensive that working class families could not afford them. While some people hold the view against the idea that governments should cover the education fees, I believe there are definitely more advantageness than disadvantageness.
Several drawbacks should be considered when implementing this policy. Firstly, the money spent on the free education project is from government revenue, which could lead to a tax increase. The government might impose educational tax on everyone in this country. It is extremely unfair to those people without the need of education. Secondly, the government should allocate the fund to those public services like hospitals, polices, and infrastructure projects which are immediately associated to the public's daily life. The public health and securities are far more important than education.
In my opinion, this policy can definitely result in many merits. Firstly, countless students drop out of school due to financial concerns every year. They could benefit a lot from this proposal which means They could continue their education without worrying about tuitions. With more teenagers in school, it might cut the criminal rate and juvenile delinquency. Free tuition makes it possible for more students from economic deprived families to have the access to higher education, thus let them to gain an edge in an ever-increasing competitive job market. It could lead many families out of dire poverty. In addition, many workers could also gain a lot from this project. They may receive adult education or vocational training if the policy could be implemented. As a result, they can give more values to not only the employees but also whole country. More government revenue could be expected if the company could make more profit. Finally, this project could increase the literacy rates and everyone's educational qualifications, which could give the country an edge in the ever increasingly globalised world. The cultural industries and entertaining business will be booming because of more people are qualified in these specific areas which needs a lot of education.
In conclusion, despite the burden on taxpayers, the free education supported by governments could benefit not only each person, each company, but also the whole society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, while, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 7.85571142285 280% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1967.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43370165746 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86919248197 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57182320442 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 617.4 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.1401788008 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6666666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2380952381 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95238095238 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115402777479 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375993245816 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562743136945 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966462783785 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382774892463 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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