You are having problems with a neighbour’s animals because the fence between your properties is old and in poor repair. You want the neighbour to pay half the cost of building a new fence.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter
• say what the problems are and explain how a new fence will solve the problems
• suggest that the neighbour pays half of the cost.
Dear Mr. Smith,
My name is Haki Nguyen and I am your next door neighbour. I am writing this letter to express my concerns about your pet dogs that are quite unfriendly and hostile in nature and we need a proper solution for this matter.
To begin with, the dogs are particularly aggressive and bark incessantly at bystanders. Last Sunday, my children were playing in the backyard of our house and the dogs abruptly tried to intimidate them. Thanks to the fence in between, my children could manage to get back home safely.
In light of the above incident, I think it is important for us to address the poor condition of the fence. The fence is in fundamental need of repair. So I propose that a new iron fence be erected that can act as an effective barrier to keep everybody safe, including the dogs. Finally, I would suggest that we split the associated installation cost of the new fence which would be beneficial for both the families. Good quality iron fence is expensive but it will pinch less if we both share the cost.
Looking forward to hearing from you,
Haki
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Looking forward to hearing from you, Haki
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, look, so, i think, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64248704663 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52868851737 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647668393782 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1264539713 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4545454545 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5454545455 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179017073357 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572711359085 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362837265247 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0884484010565 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424492130282 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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