The emergence of the online “blogosphere” and social media has significantly weakened the quality of political discourse in the United States. When anyone can publish political opinions easily, standards for covering news and political topics will inevitably decline.
Social media has brought the revolution in information communication, but along with this revolution, it has given enough freedom to individual to publish their own point and issue. This has degrade the standard of genuine news. When someone post their opinion on social media, entire world can able to view it and comment on it. Ultimately, everyone has enough space and freedom to express their view. Sometimes, rumours or false news can spread too strongly that it will effect million of lives. Suppose in India, during Hindu - Muslim riots, people used social media to spread conflicting and aggressive new. This will result in great social violence in society.
In addition, during the election time, people used social media to spread false news regarding president candidate. Sometimes, which will result into wrong president win like Donald Trump. There are several cases, when people had used social media for their own purpose without think anything about others. Today, nothing can be hide from social media, especially about celebrities, many times their personal life had been exposed to social media, which is wrong thing. To stop this wrong information spread, social networking sites like Facebook and Twitter must put some check on the people post.
Many genuine news channels are trying to provide real news, but now people are migrated to the social site, where they can trust on false report, but not on the standard new channle. This had made serious impact on news reporter, sometimes they feels discourage. Because after doing lots of the research and hardwork, they prepare one single report, which will drastically underestimated by general public. We should respect their work. Especially in U.S., during the election time, many people make meme of celebrity or presedential candidate and spread it on WhatsApp, Facebook or Twitter. This will make am person or candidate less suitable for election in general public eyes. In India, during the election time the Rahul Gandhi, who former presidence of congress party had been trolled on social media by creating his funny memes, which had reduced his respect in citizen eye, ultimately he lost the prime minister election.
Government should imposed the law regarding spread of wrong information and punish the victim accordingly, but it might be possibility that people are afraid to share their view. As two sides of the coin, social media has pros and cons. Sometimes, it might be case that Political leaders give bribe to national news reporter to give good news about him and made him/her good person in public eyes to win election. Sometimes, they give bribe to spread wrong news about his competitors to damage their reputation. In this case, social media plays an vital role to make people aware about such activity.
There should be balance between Social media freedom versus freedom of peoples expression on social media. There should be control on spread of canard and also there should be fear in political leader to exposed of his/her wrong activities on social media.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, regarding, so, in addition, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2563.0 2235.4752809 115% => OK
No of words: 497.0 442.535393258 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1569416499 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41170008869 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 215.323595506 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51509054326 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 791.1 704.065955056 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.6414621857 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5769230769 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1153846154 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53846153846 5.21951772744 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170768448249 0.243740707755 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532549403737 0.0831039109588 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354223471618 0.0758088955206 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107691484906 0.150359130593 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256522000971 0.0667264976115 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 100.480337079 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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