Human activities make the world a better place to live in. however, do you agree or disagree that human activities do more harm than preserving the earth?
Some people are of the belief that there is already a positive impact to continually aid in the rehabilitation of the world. I affirm that this is not currently what is happening right now.
First of all, the increasing demand for a better quality of life has lead developers into modernization. This effort is utterly destroying the ecosystem where animals are living in harmony and plant are growing. The building of mega cities, which involves the creation of resorts, corporate industries, condominiums and other commercial buildings is not perfect for the environment and animals won’t have a place to live in making them move out from where they used to adapt before.
Furthermore, people are not disciplined properly when it comes to garbage disposal as they are unable to perfectly practice sorting out of waste material to appropriately find out which ones are to be disposed and recycled. In fact, most of the wastes come from tourism and food industry and also from homeowners who cannot make the time and effort to sort out trashes. As a result, waste products like plastics and metals get piled up and slowly adds up to the effect of pollution.
Finally, the ineffective application of environmental strategies to resolve ongoing problems is making it hard for our planet to get rehabilitated. There is no enough funding to support the initiative of developing such helpful actions. The most rural part of third world countries are mostly affected by this and in turn won’t get enough information about how grave is the situation right now in our world. This leads to lack of information.
By and large, some people may think that the world is still a good place to live in and men are significantly contributing to make it better. However, I am of the opinion that human activities may cause the destruction of our world due to modernization, the lack of discipline and inability to apply strategies for information dissemination.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, third, in fact, as a result, by and large, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03374233129 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97583483821 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579754601227 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.5660007551 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.214285714 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126992636542 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0376761753365 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481148034265 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0705042809717 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741186236774 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.