Without capital punishment (death penalty), our lives are less secure and crimes and violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. Do you agree or disagree?
In today’s generation, there are high incidence of death and some people still think that criminals still need to be forgiven with second chances. However, I am of the belief that violators of life have to pay for their deeds and undergo capital punishment such as death penalty.
In the Philippines, where so much pity has been given to criminals, most of the citizens oppose to the idea of capital punishment. One teenage girl died and her face was skinned while she was fighting for her death while another one was shot in the head by her father which is definitely unnerving as such death rates due to murder is still existing at a high rate. If such act stands as one of the laws in the country, killers and those who don’t value life will think twice knowing that if they violate the law, they will pay it with their own life.
Furthermore, other crimes will significantly decrease because the laws are there to guide the government to act on a stricter way. Bahrain, Singapore and Indonesia are one of the countries who are strictly implement capital punishment. As a result, there is a low instance of criminality and people have peace of mind knowing that their neighborhood is a better place to live in.
Lastly, the high risk population who can benefit the most are the underprivileged group such as the women, children and elderly who cannot successfully defend for themselves. Violence happen because life is not being regarded as an important aspect in the society. Gangs who are behind some riots, kidnapping of members of the family of the well-off individuals and physical abuse are being kept to a minimum because such law is there to protect innocent lives.
In conclusion, while most of the citizens think that life should not be paid by another life, I am of the firm opinion that murders much be put to a desirable death. This does not only reduce the mortality rate from killing but can also minimize other crimes and can give assurance to the greater public.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 207, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'implemented'.
Suggestion: implemented
...e one of the countries who are strictly implement capital punishment. As a result, there ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, lastly, second, so, still, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76724137931 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60130173365 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554597701149 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.9027094627 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.615384615 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7692307692 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0985160976802 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0382992527116 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393973847223 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0557466505396 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280022987751 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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