Giving quality time on research one can be benefited in numerous way and led to a new innovation.
Giving quality time on research one can be benefited in numerous way and led to a new innovation.
The speaker claims that money spent of research is a good investment even though the results would be not inclined towards one’s favour. I wholeheartedly agree with the speakers claim, because you must spend money to make money and any investment in knowledge always pays the best interest. Doing research can always fill you with the knowledge that might get used somewhere, no knowledge goes unused ever in human life.
Firstly, today’s world is of self learning world people tend to learn more rather than being dependent on other’s knowledge. Time and money spent of research is way more than only relying on some other source. For instance, Indian Space Research Organisation (ISRO) is the space agency of the Government of India. Years back India used to launch Space shuttle with the help of other counties technology, being one of the fastest growing nation there was no indigenous technology to launch their own space rocket, but now in 2019 Indian government have invested million dollars for the research which made them successfully launch their own space rocket,
Secondly, Giving quality time on research one can be benefited in numerous way and lead to a new innovation. Scientist spends most of the time of their lives in research on the basis of minute details, they tend to be very optimistic even though the their end goal have not been accomplished because the time and money spent on research always lead to multiple new innovations. For instance, the great scientist Thomas Invented failed 10,000 times but kept a belief in his research and hard-work, after his many failed attempts he invented first electric light bulb.
Thirdly, Controversies are made by people who doesn’t believe themselves and has no courage of doing research work. However, research which leads invention can cut both ways, new technology can be convience to human being and can be a topic of controversy with hell lot of downside but, that doesn’t mean one should stop investing in research and making most out of it. For example, Invention of nuclear bomb made so many countries a super power in all aspects in todays world , misuse of such invention can destroy life on earth. Even though it have become a controversial topic still many countries are investing in nuclear power.
In the final analysis, research have always proved betterment of a nation and individual, every thing on earth is two-edged sword with pros and cons but appropriate use of research and knowledge can never hinder growth. Great scientist and scholars should be encouraged in diligent research, after all they contribute to grow GDP of a country and maintain international engagement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'innovation'.
Suggestion: innovation
... benefited in numerous way and led to a new innovation. The speaker claims that money spent...
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Line 5, column 393, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'counties'' or 'county's'?
Suggestion: counties'; county's
...ch Space shuttle with the help of other counties technology, being one of the fastest gr...
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Line 5, column 571, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...in 2019 Indian government have invested million dollars for the research which made the...
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Line 7, column 94, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'innovation'.
Suggestion: innovation
...benefited in numerous way and lead to a new innovation. Scientist spends most of the time of t...
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Line 7, column 247, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'their'?
Suggestion: the; their
... tend to be very optimistic even though the their end goal have not been accomplished bec...
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Line 9, column 488, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...per power in all aspects in todays world , misuse of such invention can destroy li...
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Line 9, column 543, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[2]
Message: “Even though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ch invention can destroy life on earth. Even though it have become a controversial topic st...
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Line 9, column 558, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...n destroy life on earth. Even though it have become a controversial topic still many...
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Line 11, column 326, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...earch, after all they contribute to grow GDP of a country and maintain internatio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, after all, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2339.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 458.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10698689956 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71233167828 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524017467249 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 697.5 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.4146765078 60.3974514979 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.1875 118.986275619 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.625 23.4991977007 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 5.21951772744 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.413766473003 0.243740707755 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150348654853 0.0831039109588 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.236322829551 0.0758088955206 312% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.31226274241 0.150359130593 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.325385995614 0.0667264976115 488% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 14.1392134831 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.95 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.