Should governments make decision about people's lifestyle, or should people make their own decision.
Some section of the society believe that government should take the responsibility of deciding about the life style of the people, however, others think that power to make decision should be vested with people themselves. According to me, not all, but the power to some of the actions should be governed by the authorities for the benefit of the society.
Firstly, we live in an independent world where, every individual has a right to live his own life as per his will. For instance, governing bodies should not have any say, where a person chooses to live or the profession he picks. He should be allowed to live anywhere in the country and do whatever he wants to do. Secondly, by restricting the choices of the people government may end up in the right evolvement of human beings which may further lead to anxiety and depression.
Although, humans have the right to live their life, but there are certain measures that needs to be taken by the government to save the interest of the nation as a whole. To illustrate, in India during Diwali, it is people's choice to burn crackers as it a traditional method of celebrating the festival. However, if there is no check implemented on the volume , it may result in lung diseases. Moreover, ban on loud music after a defined timeline is also necessary as it will not disturb the neighbourhood.
In conclusion, in my opinion, though it is sole discretion of the people , how they live their life, at the same time, intervention of the authorities is also required for the peace and progress of the country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 223, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...hould be vested with people themselves. According to me, not all, but the power to some of the ...
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Line 1, column 266, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ording to me, not all, but the power to some of the actions should be governed by the autho...
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Line 7, column 360, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...re is no check implemented on the volume , it may result in lung diseases. Moreove...
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Line 10, column 73, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ough it is sole discretion of the people , how they live their life, at the same t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76102941176 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76410404867 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584558823529 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5326418804 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.727272727 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7272727273 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8181818182 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257183000979 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824237546645 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854363436295 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143300875019 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0940756862191 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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