You have recently changed your job and started working for a new company.Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter:•explain why you changed your previous job•describe your new job•tell him/her your other newsYou should write at le

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You have recently changed your job and started working for a new company.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter:
• explain why you changed your previous job
• describe your new job
• tell him/her your other news
You should write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Begin your letter as follows:

Dear ............,

Dear Eric,

Hope you’re in good health. I am writing this letter to inform you that I have been employed with Google from June 2019 as a software programmer.

I was working with Master Company as Trainee software programmer from last five years and there my position was stagnant. I was in search of new job where my skills can be used in a better way and to grow in future.

While I was checking for new jobs on an online portal, I came through the position of software programmer in Google headquarters, UK. Without a second thought, I applied for it and grabbed that position after successfully cracking the interview. Now I am leading the team of five and working on software required for financial institution to make digital transactions more convenient to their customers.

Another good news is that I have purchased an apartment which is on 20th floor with an open terrace, where I can see the entire city view. I will be hosting a house warming party next month and would like to invite you for the same.

Hope to see you soon.

Best regards,
Tim Frank

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ars and there my position was stagnant. I was in search of new job where my skill...
^
Line 5, column 206, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...can be used in a better way and to grow in future. While I was checking for new jobs ...
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70157068063 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62007231313 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633507853403 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1810699525 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6363636364 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3636363636 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.54545454545 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142986245948 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050593068579 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342507587137 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.077428081929 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191857759055 0.0580467560999 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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