Some people say that the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having a lot of money make people happy? What other things in life can make people happy?
It is important to stay cheerful for living a successful and satisfying life. It is argued by some that earning a huge amount of money gives people more joy; however, there are other aspects of life such as loved ones and pets that play a vital part in creating happiness.
People who are wealthy are often financially stable and could easily fulfill their materialistic needs and desires of life. This is because, buying luxury cars, costly clothes and traveling to exotic locations gives them a sense of satisfaction. Furthermore, rich people can avail the best health-care and offer better education to their children, which increases their standard of living compared to those who have less money. With the required wealth, and so craving, one can feel the real bliss of their life. A dream car, a dream house and a world tour with a lovely wife, for example, can be obtained with a sufficient amount of money, which will provide gratifications.
Apart from money, there are various other factors that can bring joy in an individual's life. One of them is having a healthy relationship with his loved ones. This could be anyone in your family or could be your partner or a pet animal. Spending a few hours of the day with your friends, families or love interest fills your heart with warmth and results in joyful time. According to a study conducted by the Psychology Department, people who own a pet dog spend more time smiling and laughing and find easy to overcome stress and other worries in life.
In conclusion, belonging to the affluent part of society allows you to seek materialistic pleasures which in turn brings happiness; but this is not the only way, and maintaining good relationships and playing with your pets will enlighten different prospectives and is often inexpensive.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
... other factors that can bring joy in an individuals life. One of them is having a healthy r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91147540984 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70034188167 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603278688525 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7772146654 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.230769231 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197958628437 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713233879315 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516211744967 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116322979471 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607065679406 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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