you have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect
write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter
* correct the information in the article
* explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information
* suggest what the magazine should do about the situation
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Manas Ranjan Sahu indigenous to Bolangir town which is famous for its idyllic views and a renowned festival named as Chocojane. I am writing this letter to inform you about an article, which is recently published one week ago, has a piece of misleading information about Chocojane.
In the article, it is mentioned that the festival starts from the first week of October; however, in fact, it begins from 3rd week of October every year. According to me, it is a tremendous mistake that has made by your publishers.
Moreover, it will disguise the tourist, who all depend on your magazine to plan their travel journey accordingly.
I will suggest you that, kindly republish the same article with appropriate information and a apologies note to my native people, which will not only increase tourist adherence toward your article but also there will be warm regards from Bolangir people.
Hope you will act on this deceptive article and soon come up with concrete details about the Chocojane festival.
Yours faithfully,
Manas Ranjan Sahu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 155, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...ns from 3rd week of October every year. According to me, it is a tremendous mistake that has ma...
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Line 9, column 93, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...rticle with appropriate information and a apologies note to my native people, whi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, however, moreover, so, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 904.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07865168539 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62356543062 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.679775280899 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.4669331122 44.8134815571 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 76.5299724578 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 4.34317383033 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25359293975 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952972749671 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717383522084 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112370429497 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575488459323 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 8.37731958763 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 8.71597938144 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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