Some believe that dangerous sports should be banned, while others think that people should be free to choose. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, practicing risky activities has become a point of contention between those who support it and those who reject it. While some individuals have strong reasons to go on this adventure, I am of the belief that these extreme sports should be prohibited due to their detrimental impact on humans' life. In the following lines, this will be thoroughly discussed.
To embark on, some sportsmen assume that these perilous activities have benevolent benefits, especially on their psychological state and their fitness. In other words, it is deemed that if they practice sports such as parachuting, paragliding, skydiving, and car races, they will feel the adrenaline release; moreover, they take these challenges in order to feel a sense of achievement. As per an article published in The Guardian, around 85% of sportsmen who reached the summit of Everest said that this experience helped them to rejuvenate their cluttered mind and clear negative emotions. Another reason is that these activities require a well fitted body and a daily practice in the gym to preserve their performance. Therefore, the more they practice these sports, the more they feel happiness.
Nevertheless, despite the merits mentioned above, others claim that these sports have become a threat to persons' life. Firstly, not only do these dangerous sports expose the sportsmen to a permanent disability, but they also may lead to fatal crashes. According to some research studies that have revealed that 40% of practitioners in motorbikes races lost their legs in accidents, and 10% of them lost their life due to internal hemorrhage. Secondly, if any accidents happen to the practitioners, their families and relatives will suffer from pain and depression. This means that practicing these perilous activities should be forbidden.
To conclude, having clarified both aspects, it can be reiterated that sportsmen should not feel excited at the expanse of losing their life. Moreover, I concur that the Ministry of Youth and Sport ought to put a limit to these activities because of the aforementioned causes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1764.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32930513595 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90209536707 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580060422961 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2757396088 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.6 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0666666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1315732229 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506177825359 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572050997958 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100209227658 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045294066807 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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